Friday, July 31, 2009

Tuma Pain

MU JEBE MARIBI,JAHNARE RAHIBI
SMRUTIKU PATHEYA KARI

MO SITA SANTALA,JOSHNARE NITI
DHOI DEUTHIBI TUMA KABARI

SOPNA ANTARALE
TUMANKU NIREKHI
PREMA BARIDHARA DHALIBI

SMRUTIKU TUMARA
MO MANA MANDIRE
PUSPA PARAE PUJIBI

ABASTABA MORA
MARA SARIRAKU
PARIBANI TUME CHUIN

CHALIJIBI DURE
RAHIJIBA PASE
SNEHA SMRUTI AAU PRITI TUMARI.......................

28 comments:

  1. Hi Ramakant,
    Its really very very good and heart touching oriya kabita.

    Sarmistha

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  2. HI,
    dost,i think u have lost valuable things in your life.don't worry for that. wait for time.Really, ur kabita is excellent and heart toching.keep it up.thanks

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  3. Hi Ramakant,
    Ur kabita is very very excellent & heart touchable, pathetic and sweet also.
    ........lots of good wishes 4 ur coming new oriya poetry,so dont stop, keep it up.
    thanks

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  4. Aapp ka ye poem dil ko chu jata hai,kuda kare aap ke kalam se kavi sai na khatam ho aur aap aese hi likha kare aur dil se humari mubarahk bat kubul kare. thanx

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  5. Tumhari ish kabita ka kya jawab du,
    apne dost ko kya uphar du,
    koi accha sa phool hota to mali se mangvata,
    jo khud gulab hai usko kya gulab du...
    kabita likhne ki mubark ho

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  6. HI,
    Its A Nice oriya Kabita.That touch my heart.I think 'U'R Really good to written Oriya kabita.Pls continue Written in ur Whole Life Dont stop this.

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  7. A special smile a special face,
    A special someone no one can replace.
    we rememeber you and always will,
    You've filled a space no one could fill.
    so thanx 4 ur kabita ,keep it up.

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  8. Aap ki kabita dil ko chhuti he dil me halchal si machalti he aap hamesa yashi hi kabita likha karo yahi arman hamari he
    thanx

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  9. YE PAARO KAUN HAI JISKE LIYE TISRA DEVDAS(1st-:Deelip kumar,2nd-:Shahrukh Khan) PEDA HO GAYA....BY THE WAY NICE SONG BUT THODI AUR MODIFY HOTA TO ACHHA REHTA N WHAT IS THE MEANING OF KABARI?????AAP K KABITA K 3rd STANZA MEIN HAI.....

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  10. I think...
    Aaap ki Dreamgirl koi kabbutar hai kya????????Mujhe kuch aisa hi laga("Mitare..")..Agar aisi dreamgirl mil jaye to hume jarur batana.Best Of Luck...........anyway ur kabita is very nice.
    ok Kabutar ko dhunte raho...
    Thanx...

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  11. After death your future plan is excellent but do you know whats your girl friend do when you stay in moon?
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    Woh kisi aur ko app ke paas bhejne ki kosis karegi kyun ki yahanka population kuch jyada hogaya hai,achha hoga agar app appki girl friend ko hi direct wahan bhej de.Pehle use kehna ki "HUM SAATH HAIN"phir"TO PAAIN"next"As JANHARE KARIBA GHARA"
    dont mind

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  12. Hi,
    Appke Kabita main pata nahi kya hai.....Jo itne log itnisari baat likh rahe hai..Mere liye kuchh bacha ho to likhu...Nice Poetry

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  13. Aab to Technology itni badhgayee hai ke koi chahe to chaand pe jasakta hai,iske liye aap ko marne ki kya jarurat hai...(mu jebe mari bi janha re rahibi).....samjhe kuch
    aur to main soch rahi hoon ki aap dono ke liye rocket bhejoon aur aap chahe to wahan rehjana aur aap ke swapna sundariji ko dharti par wapas bhej dena....

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  14. Hai Ramakant nice Kavita koun hai woh ladki jiske liye app itne dur jaane ki baat karte hain?app ke saath rehne se kya use koi problame hai?Meri baat mano to kahin jaane ki yaa marne ki koi jarurat nahin."TRY TO STAY FOR EVER WITH HER"

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  15. Hi,

    Its really very nice and heart touching. I will keep on visiting your blog very ofen and will anxiously look for some new heart touching kabitas. So, please keep on updating....

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  16. what a wonderful poem.i realy like this type of poems.thanks a lot

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  17. Nice.............................................................................................................................

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  18. I have no words to comment.......
    But i must say u r the rock star of this Kavita World!! u r god gifted , god bless u, my well wishes are always with you.
    keep it up...........


    urs vavi

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  19. mote bahut bhala lagila,asa kare tama kalama ru amiti kabita jharuthiba...............

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  20. Apananka Kabita la jawab Heichhi,

    bahut Bahla

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  21. Superb ,its reallay heart Touching.KEEP IT UP

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  22. Bahut bhala hoichhi. Kintu kaha pain ye kabitati?

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  23. bhabana tumara ,jaha manare rahichi
    kahichi kalama muna
    mana ru tumara bhuligale madhya,
    rahijiba ehi chinha,
    ehi chinha kebe libhiba nahi,
    juga juga pain sttai,
    laguchi jemiti janha pakhe jai,rahiba chai te hoi.

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  24. bhaia apka kabita bahat hi acha laga.

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  25. This is for the first time I read something actually written by you, and I must say that I am much impressed!!! It is very nice, really. Delicate and sensitive.

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